All Comments on 'A Concerned Mother Pt. 01'
by malid
- 15 Comments
prop69almost 7 years agoMaybe add his sister after Mom.
Make it a family threesome.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agogreat story! loved how it played out and i look forward to the next part!!
Familyguy469almost 7 years agoHe needs to come home and find you on his bed shoving your panties in your pussy. Then daughter needs to give both of you a good time before she leaves for college.
dirtymom49almost 7 years agoLet mom bring more men home for her son to hear and maybe even spy on her having sex...
malidalmost 7 years agoAuthorI will be doing a second part in the next few days and will incorporate some of the ideas in the comment section. I had a bit of a twist on the story in mind, but I may just leave that for another time. Thanks for the comments.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoMom better get knocked up this time....by son.
Thanks.
e200znalmost 7 years agoThis is a great story! I loved it and i look forward to the next part!!.....introduce Mom first....& then sister.........wondervacious
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoMany moms have discovered son uses her panties. Some are freaked out, some try to ignore it but quite a few use it to their advantage. It is a strange thrill and an ego boost to know son jo for mom.,
malidalmost 7 years agoAuthorDue to a setback (loosing a portion of the work and rewriting it) I am still editing Pt. 2. The story is complete, but I want to go over it once again and make sure it feels like the same narrative. I don't want to ruin immersion by creating a disjointed feeling between the two parts. I plan on writing another three or so chapters, so the dynamic between mother and son ( and perhaps sister) will continue to evolve. If you are eager to see mother and son fuck, then I have to say sorry, this is more of a slow boil, and it has one or two twists and turns left.
Anonymousalmost 7 years ago... has lots of potential. Reading some of the comments, I would like to say this: write the story the way you meant to, irregardless of readers' suggestions. You cannot please all readers anyway, so go with your instinct.
