All Comments on 'A Concerned Mother Pt. 02'

Ma tahaks oma ema ka keppida,aga ei tea mismoodi algust teha.Mul on jube himu emaga ühes voodis magada.Mina saan varsti 18.aastat vanaks,ja ema on 51.aastane.Palun andke nõu kuidas alustada.Tänan.

Where is the incest? I don't want to read about some slut. Do me a favor and don't bother with a third chapter.

I'm enjoying these stories quite a bit. I love how this mother is trying to make her son jealous enough to eventually fuck her himself. A wonderful twisted seduction story.

You want your son & fuck any hard dick. WHAT A FUCKING BITCH.

YOU ARE JUST A SLEEXY WHO'RE.

YOU could have had your son after Richard.

I gave you 3 stars by mistake.

Should have been 1

This category is INCEST/TABOO not TORMENT MY SON while I fuck Any SWINGING COCK in the county.

What kind of BITCH ARE YOU?

Your son has needs bitch and you just keep flauting it in his face.

Time to speed it up. The build up is too long and tedious. Get that boy's cock in your nasty pussy.

Love the story keep up the good work! Next step is for her to let him know she knows he watches and have her encourage him!

Here we go again, another author thinking a little bit at a time is good and will keep us titillated. Good luck on that especially with 6 days between parts and still no payoff.

I hate when authors do this and it's not nearly as good or close to when you are about to put it in a girl and she stops you, this is more at the point where you begin stroking and are flaccid and stop there.

In short, YOU LOSE, GOOD DAY SIR! *

thanks for your efforts

Ole oma emale hea laps ja aita teda alati kui te kahekesi elate.Kuula ema sõna,vahest kaisuta teda,ja tee seda pidevalt,siis ema tunneb,et armastad teda.Emad just armastust vajavad ning hakkavad mõtlema ka seksile.See võib pikalt aega võtta,aga saa aru kohe järsku ei ole see mingi mõnu.Head peale hakkamist sulle.

Having read many stories across Literotica, I have come to appreciate the story as much as (or possibly more than) the images of sex. I enjoy the attention to detail and tone of these two chapters, as the story seems to evolve in a somewhat natural way. The inner thought process is important to the tone and character, and projection to the son and a mother's awareness of who he is provides an amazing complement to the spell that the writer casts. Thank you for providing excellent context as the story builds.

This has the potential to be one of the hottest stories I've ever read.

You have a great voice. My favorite parts have to be the little things, like the mom hearing the door lock to her sons room, or how she makes a point of kissing and hugging him close before school every day... The slow seduction is tantalizingly brilliant.

Another awesome thing is how the inner dialogue is almost as hot as the action.

Seeing a mother throw away her morals out of pure lust for her son is very satisfying.

I really hope you ignore any negative comments cause you've got a real eye for something here. Stick to your original plan and do as much build up as you want, it'll just make the payoff even sexier. Thank you so much for writing this!

Mom wants son so bad. But she wants him to want her just as bad. I hope she keeps doing naughty things to drive him crazy. That way, when he gives in, it will be for good. He will never see her as a mother but as his woman. It is time for her boy to become a man! And then the incest bug will infect the sister! 5 STARSSSS

Even build up can be sexy.

No one likes feeling ripped off. The fact that you got in the 4s with a one page story is pretty incredible. Its like eating one lays potato chip, though. If you've got good writing you have to put enough out there to fill people's appetites. Watch your rating go way higher if part 3 is at least 2 pages.

And as much as I like sister/brother, mom/daughter, the mom/son plot seems really good. I'd hate to have too much attention pulled away by the sister... but that's just me

As much as I totally agree with everybody else, the one thing that is obviously missing is CHAPTER THREE!!! When's it cumming??

Son will now stay away from her diseased cum dump slut of a mother

I Love the intro to this series, WHy did you stop?

You have so many gateways here, I want to see that mom seduce that son! Make it happen! peace

I am in the process of reviewing and editing the third part, guys. I haven't posted the last part, because the tone felt off. I know that might seem silly, given the nature of the work, but I was thinking about the readers. It should be ready in a couple of days. Sorry for the delay, and thanks for reading!

For the next parts you promised Looking forward to where this story goes

~@#$%~

BUT Am I SURPRISED? NOT AT ALL.

I saw a lot of negative feedback about the slow boiling narrative. I decided to write the rest of it and post it when its complete. However, after I finished it, it amounted to very little. So, it is more or less a trunk novel. I will release another chapter to finish it, which is already written, but I have a tricky ending to rework.

God!!!! WOW!!! I have read your incest and trans stories and each time.. well let's just say. there was some cleaning up to do.. you have hit my particular sexual bent with delightful precision.. thank you.. may your next adventures be filled with more lust, more suspense and much much more cleaning up for me to do.. :-)

4 years with no finale. Very disappointing.