All Comments on 'A Conquest of Fire Ch. 01'

Every POV switch should have been accompanied by a line break, which somehow didn't make it through the submission process; apologies for the confusion.

The next chapter should be ready soon and published by the end of the week. Thanks for reading!

-Lytheros

Beautifully written, totally captivating. I can't wait to read more, hope Selena falls pregnant.

Heheh. You're gonna kick bone fide arse aren't yah? I would love to see this side of the non-con section through a male brain's perspective. Mostly I'm under the impression men just can't hack non-con with a 'heart-beat', cause they leave skid-marks while skirting it, going for 'obsessed' rather than 'infatuated', while there are females doing serious damage in both. But you seem to more than know what you're doing, cause this first chapter was bloody brilliant. I'm gonna be rude and say - hurry up and write another.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

Another magic cock story. Breath taking.

Please keep it going!

That was fuckin amazing!!! I'm so glad you took the approach of not drawing out details and going in full force! Even though you went right to the juicy part, you have enough details and character development to truly made everything worked! A rare talent I must say. Wow I can't wait for another chapter. Although I would like more resistance on her part, the 'Cat and Mouse' thing will be amusing to see between the main characters! Wonderful chapter, CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Really great story please keep going asap. I really hope she gets pregnant soon and they fall for each other

Banal

I'm sorry but who finds this captivating? She goes from hating her enemy to enjoying him raping her in one chapter?? It's so rushed. No slow burn plus a weak female lead is a bad combination.

I like the slow burns. I also like the quick and dirties.

This has the beginnings of the type of character building one expects in the slow burns, AND it has the immediate satisfaction of a good, thorough fuck.

I love it. Well done.

I imagine Nyssa from Arrow in the role. Or maybe even Lady Sif from the Thor movies.

Loving the story so far and your writing is great! Please continue *_*

I would love to read more.

Another magic dick story where everything is given away in chapter 1. zero plot. Why multi chapter?

AMAZING!!! I cant wait for the next chapter

Please, pretty please! Please continue this story. I would so love to read more.

Really enjoyed this. Keep going!

I can't speak for anyone else, but I'm certainly ready for the next chapter.

This is a favorite that I just keep coming to. Incredibly ridiculous and terrible pun intended.

Excellent start, would love another chapter

This was so great! Please add another installment!