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All Comments on 'A Country Road'

by Sweetest_wet

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kingleonidasskingleonidassover 12 years ago
A little short

Nice start. Keep going.

writerjabwriterjabover 12 years ago
Sweet!

I agree, short and too the point. Well written too. I could see each scene unfold as if I were right there. I'll look forward to your second installment.

RedguyTxRedguyTxover 12 years ago
Great Job!

You've got the knack. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice Quickie

Looking forward to the next chapter.

LordMhoramLordMhoramover 12 years ago
Loved the quickie.

Very well done. I read in the forum you do this as an "exercise"? Wow! Keep it up, I'll be watching for more from your pen!

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