All Comments on 'A Couple Brought Together Act 02'

by realvelvetglove

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good story

Great start. This is sort of how I see my retirement tormenting mentored subbies.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
An excellent author

I've not read this chapter yet but I expect it will be as good as the other works from VG. Writing good erotica is hard thus the vast majority is, being honest, complete and utter crap. Velvet Glove's characters have depth and react in believable ways. These sort of stories need friction between characters and in their internal pushing and pulling desires and fears. Friction generates heat. Too often virtual nuns turn into one dimensional sluts at the drop of a hat. A character completely willingly being cuckolded or cuckolding/going into chastity/submitting without any conflict, misgivings or nerves is boring. Velvet Glove understands these things and writes very creatively.

Thanks for the stories.

BTW, I don't see your '5 Words' posted here. The other site is so broken and full of virus warnings it would be good to have it on Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story is certainly one of the best....

jsch1947jsch1947about 1 year ago

You gave a warning about Dom/sub. You did NOT warn of watersports or scat.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This is a terrible story. I can’t read any further. I am all about a Dom/sub relationship, but this story would be criminal in the real world. Realveletglove, I hope you are treated like this one day.

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