All Comments on 'A Crazy Summer Day Ch. 01'

I am a fan of your well written father daughter incest tales and it is great to have you back after a long absence. Please keep up this series. Thanks.

It's so true that two teens have such an influence of each other. I loved the progression of the daughter from a wish to reality to get what she wanted. But she would not have done it without encouragement. Well written. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

keep on writting the daughter gave the father what he needed something mom didn't or wouldn't from one author to another again great story; tenbears43

This is the first time I have commented on a story of this type. I have read many of them and they all come and go the same way. This one was completely different. This one had a story that led to the final outcome which is naturally predictable. However, how you got to that point is what I am going to comment about. Your writing was superior. Your sense of description of the scenes prior to the last act were extremely well put together and the entire story made sense. It was not a hodgepodge of little vignettes. That is why I gave this story for stars. Bravo

This story is really hot. There is a good slow build up of tension and eroticism that many people can't match. If there is a problem it is only minor spelling issues and the occasional mistake in grammar. A little editing and this story could easily be the best written and most arousing story of its kind on this site. Bravo.

This story is one, that if you can, picture each sentence, as reality playing out, as you read it ...... Then you have had a Wonderful Fantasy that will drive your imagination

on and on !!!!!!!!! Thanks for a Great Read !!!!

Really fun story. Hope you will write even more to the rest of the series.

Please learn the difference between waste (useless, leftover, garbage) and waist (the narrowest part of your torso.

Pool boy is going to have a mess to clean with all those towels and arms around the "waste." LOL. Fun story, though!