All Comments on 'A Crazy Voyage Ch. 01'

You had me glued to your story every step of the way .I loved it and got off more than once .Now I am typing with wet fingers after satisfying my pussy .

Have to clean the keyboard now . Thanks .

What can I say? Great job and I can not wait for the next few chapters!

Just what I have always wanted! Two hot teens in my bed and be out in international waters! Oh my goodness what a great story!! But you have to write more on this soon!!

Thanks for a story well written and well thought out!

I saw the potential for a good story so I read the first page - mostly introduction with some girl on girl action. NOT obvious speaker is a girl, but eventually could assume that. But Page 2 is wordy & still introduction. Same with Page 3. By then page 4 is just disappointment. What a waste of time reading this

Loved the first chapter in the pool as well as this one. Both were fucking hot!!!!

Window pain? Really? How bad was the window hurting? There is a huge difference between pain and pane. And lye is a caustic substance used by serial killers to dissolve their victims’ remains. NOT something you do while prone. And that’s just the first page, which is where I stopped reading.