All Comments on 'A Creamy Birthday Present'

i 2 love to teaze my hubby i have never had the nerve i get wet thing about it and have to masterbate every time norma

My husband and I fantasize about this too! Very nice job! I loved how you developed the story! Please do more like this one!

A very hot story from beginning to end. The part about Alan being a cum licker was a downer for me; but the rest of the tale was wild and wonderful. Thanks. Ron

Great...along the lines of a personal fantasy, so I really enjoyed it.

Awesome story as always. thanks for writing it

Wow! Very hot! I've shared this fantasy with Tanya many times - I'd love for someone to fill her sweet cunt with a big load of cum (but I'd rather watch or join in - then lick her pussy clean!)

Thanks for writing!

Nick and Tanya

A great story - how I wished I was Alan cleaning your sexed pussy. If only I could persuade my wife to do the same.

what a great story like to try this myself.

My wife works night at a care center and I have expressed to her numerous times about her having an affair with another man. She told me that would never happen, but we both live this fantasy every time we enjoy "mutual masturbation"! I tell her I think about her at work in the early morning hours and a gentleman approaches her and they sit across on separate couchs and converse. After a short time, they engage in masturbation! She tells me how she watches him jack-off his hard cock. She touches her pussy and tells the man how she enjoys watching a man stroke his dick. He asks her to show him her pussy and she obliges and spreads open for him and after watching him for a while, plunges two fingers in her dripping pussy and screams at him to "JACK-OFF! She told me she told him to "stroke his hard cock and pump that juice out" so she could see it

God this story is so hot I could the cum !

My married girl friend used to go home after we'd be fucking for hours and let her hubby lick her swollen, oozing cunt. The mere thought of it would get me hard. I loved the idea of making a batch of semen in my prostate, flavored with sperm from my heavy testicles and spiced with testerone. I would pump it into Elaine's eager pussy while she climaxed then send her on home. I'd have her call me up while he was eating her and tell me how it was going.

Of course, later on, we fucked in front of him. His favorite position was to have his head between Elaine's legs sucking her clit while I fucked her. Every now and then I would be overly excited from feeling my balls dragging over his face and in my frenzy, my dick would slip out her and thrust down his throat...LOL IT WAS FUN FOR SURE...LOL!!

A great fantasy and well written!

You've written a classic of erotica. Congratulations - it's good to read a scalding hot story free of abusive actions or attitudes, in fact containing characters who are sensitive to each other's feelings. And it happens to follow a script that is one of my blue ribbon sexual fantasies (and - lucky me - realities a few times). Pieater

Very well done. I loved it. :)

Thank you!!

This is excellent. The fantasy and characters are great; however, I would like to give one suggestion: when the women are talkin in the beginning it would be more natural to leave out the explitives. No woman I've ever known says things to her friend such as, "In my hot creamy cunt." Best to slim it down and have it more natural sounding. Other than that - perfect read.

A great story, well thought out, well written and scorching hot. I will print it off so my wife can read it when I next lick her out, I guarantee we will both have reason to thank you. Hope there is a sequel?

hope you have some others like it!

Awesome story...wish my wife would give me such a present

I would love to have a strapping young man fuck my wife and leave her with a large creampie for me to lap up.

I'll never forget the first time my wife brought home a creampie. It was awesome! I had talked about her screwing another man on a few ocassions but she wasn't interested. She had always been a little reserved when it came to sex. Anyway, one night she went out with a girlfriend and was kind of drunk when she got home. I gave her a little hug and kiss and slid my hands up under her dress and started rubbing her ass. I then slid my hand into her panties and was completely shocked. Her panties were thoroughly soaked and sticky and so was her pussy. It was obvious that it was cum. As I looked her in the eyes she smiled and said she decided to take me up on my suggestion. When we got into bed I was so aroused I could not resist going down on her. There was some cum still oozing out of her hole as I licked and sucked her pussy. It was awesome. There was something special about licking another man's cum from my wife's pussy. She now fuckes other guys often and usually brings me home a treat.

I love to take the creampies from my wife's pussy. Usually I will go out and find a cock for her to fuck while I watch and jack off. Some times I suck the guy before I bring him home and will suck him to get him hard when I introduce him at whatever location we have chosen for the three way event. I get down very close so I can watch his cock pounding her cunt hole, knowing that shortly I can suck his cum out of her pussy. We have done as many as six cocks in one night and that still wasn't enough for either of us. She loves to call me names such as cum slut, whore, queer, etc while I suck her clean. She has never gone out on her own to find meat for her hole. That's my job and I love it. We usually don't do the same guy more than two or three times. She likes the different cocks in her, with varing shapes and sizes. I sometimes suck off 4 or 5 guys until I find the right one for us. She likes for me to tell her about the night of searching and what I had to do to find the right one. I have, on occasion, had them to fuck my asspussy as a part of the selection process as she likes to see the cum running out of my ass.

FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCKITY FUCK FUCK FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is so well written! The characters are well drawn, even though I would like to hear more about the young couple, but the narrator is a treat, as is her husband. It's almost as if Miss Marple's sister Bridgette wrote it down for us; the erotic moment so well fulfilled, I truly wished I could be Alan for an hour and be immersed in the erotic moment. Well done! I'd love to hear more of Bridgette's adventures!

Found your story very exciting and look forward to more of the same. As a creampie lover myself I fully understand the desires of the husband. The main difference between this couple and my situation is that I find the guys to fuck my wife, bring them home with me, blow them to get them hard,and guide their cocks into her pussy. I then watch the action just waiting for the creampie to be finished, then the good times begin. Sucking her pussy full of cum from another man is the greatest pleasure I can think of. The only thing better is for us to do gangbangs so that I can really get the cream. We are deeply in love with each other and see this as a valuable part of our relationship.

...and it's just as hot as ever. What a classic.

Doesn't really like anything about it. Enjoy your divorce you earned it.

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

This vile and deranged perversion is typical of British writers. Just give them all a 1* and be done.

I really enjoyed this story,great fantasy. Well written. I am going to check out your other stories.

A wife who gives you best in home and specially in bed, the love of making you proud with her skills.

Her best love is to fulfill your fantasy of creampie night.

I am also a Lucky husband who gets creamy pussy of wife filled by her lover on weekend and during week she fucks only me.

Recently she surprised me with thick sperm filled cunt, ya filled by her own father.

and one occasion he took her anal cherry and I cleaned the salty mess.

My fantasy as well. To have my 57 y/o, wife, 44EEE natural boobs, plump body, mommy belly, fat ass, tight hairy pussy, get slowly fucked by another man & come home to me. Or better yet, let me watch them fucking & him cumming in her, after she cums. Great story. My wife deserves a real cock, she has only been with me & mine is only 4" hard.

What about Darren coming over on his own to get more tastes of Brigitte without telling his wife? Would Alan start to notice love bite calling cards?

I've wanted to eat others men's come from my wife's for year's, I also have a fantasy about a husband coming up his wife's then asking me to lick her out , there's not a woman's that I wouldn't do it to, am I normal, but licking a creamy from any woman then her weeing down my throat. Yummy. Anyone interested.

People with a problem about this story - get over it. This is a fetish fantasy story. Seriously.

This was a fun, real feeling story. I like cream pies, but my own. Licking them out of my wife's pussy is something that really turns me on. Now, if I could get her to then share it with me it would be crazy!

Wow what a great story, made me so hard reading it. I would love to experience this. Just to get my girlfriend to let lick my own cum out of her pussy would be a start!

One of best stories on Literotica. I got so excited, I ate my own cum!

I too ate my own load of cum after reading this story. I have always wanted to eat it out of my wife!

Not only do I want to eat other men's creamie from my wife I also want to eat creamie from other women pussies after there husbands have come , I love the idea of about 6 or more men coming up my wife then she sits over my mouth letting it all drop into my waiting mouth . Any couples interested in having a good time then letting a stranger clean it all out with his tongue then I am waiting.

story was little long but I enjoyed master-bating to it. would love it if my wife did the same.

Enjoyed the story. I look forward to reading more of your work for sure.

He got what he wanted and she enjoyed the hell out of giving it to him!

HOT!

All of your stories are 10yrs old or more, so doubt you will even see this. But some readers might. I dislike you referring to the wife’s (or woman’s) juices as “slimey,” which has a very negative connotation to it. How about slick? glistening? Creamy? Delicious?

How much more appealing to describe the gusset of her panties as “slick and glistening with her creamy juices. I knew they would be delicious as I lifted them to my lips. And they were!” Rather than “slimey,” Which reminds me of green pond scum.

I have never eaten a cream pie, but I might with a woman I loved, and it would be my own spunk. I am single now, and getting older, so it probably will never happen. But it is an interesting fantasy.

You write well. I wonder why you stopped?

This story brought my fantasy to life.

Wonderful tale about a loving hubby's extreme wish fulfillment by his loving wife. How many men wish their wives would do exactly that! Your story virtually smelled and tasted like creamed pussy on the nose and tongue-tip. Marvelous!

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

I was in my twenties, and really serious about this girl. We had sex two times a day at least. One day I started the usual with we me sucking her pussy. Something was different this time, the taste and foamy cream. After I sucked her dry she told me she was seeing another guy behind my back. That was my first and last strangers cream pie. Another girl one the first date I started sucking her pussy with a different taste. The bitch just started her period, and since I was young I didn't figure it out. I did suck her till she came and my face was solid red. Girls taking advantage of a young guy. REAL AND TRUE.

I really love creampie...Yummy good story..

Wonderful story. I loved the way it developed from fantasy to reality. The husband was certainly ready. I started seeing an older girl when I was a senior in high school. She worked as a waitress at a diner and didn't make enough to afford her house and all of the bills. She slept with a couple of older married guys who helped her out financially. They'd pump a load or two into her and then I would pop by her house to see her about 10:00. She always insisted that I eat her cream filled pussy before I got any so I grew used to the taste of other men's cum at a young age. I'd eat her out good and proper and then proceed to fuck her. Of course, she insisted that I eat out my own cum each and every time I popped a load into her. Being 18 I was young, dumb and full of cum so I would frequently pop three or four loads a night into her. After this experience I was prepped for life and eating the pie became as natural as fucking. Needless, to say it was an added tun on for most of the girls I dated from then on.

Enjoyed it. Sweet how everybody got what they came for!

Loved the story. In the end, everyone got what they were looking for. Hopefully, the wife will indulge her husband with future escapades and they will make this a regular occurrence.

What a thoughtful wife! Loved it!!

I was hoping to here a follow up with the neighbor in returning the favor to her husband which would make for future engagements !

This story is fantastic - just like a lot of your other creampie stories (from daughters & mother-in-laws). Not only is the detailed description of Brigitte and Darren fucking fantastic, but also the detail of her getting ready for their date. The detail of the clothes she puts on and how slutty she feels really turned me on. I truly want my wife to do exactly the same thing -- to get all dressed up for her lover, to go over to his house and fuck him in front of his wife (I would actually love to watch them fuck too) and then come back home to feed me his juicy delicious creampie. I would love to go even further and drink his juicy cum directly from the tap (if you know what I mean). Sucking his cock to get him hard & ready to fuck my wife is my dream. Hopefully one day it will cum true.

another great story that needed at least one more chapter, oh well..

Thank you for expanding the dimensions of true love for this reader.

added to favorites

I lost the my husband,my children's father, my lover,my friend and it was my own fault. He came home early to surprise me before I was cleaned up. It also was the only time that I cheated. I begged but it done no good. I promised myself that I wouldn't ever date till the children were grown. Then my luck changed. It was 3 days before our date to meet with the lawyer. That evening when he was dropping off our oldest son and I asked if he would like to eat with us? He asked if we could talk privately? God yes thank you I would love to talk. He asked several questions and I must have answered them correctly because he not only ate with us but stayed and still is . Thank goodness. I have done everything I can trying to make it up to him.

Awesome, thanks for sharing

Love this story. Very well done. Loved the woman's point of view.

Damn, ain't this one hot, it's a big 5 stars from me! I reckon Darren filling Brigitte with sperm will become a regular thing since everybody had a good time and hubby Alan really enjoys doing birth control. Experience tells me Alan would enjoy sitting with Tracy and watching the Brigitte/Darren insemination parties ......

What a wonderfully wicked story. Wouldn’t it be wonderful if Darren did a home delivery so that Alan can witness the cream pie in the making and to savour all of it immediately before it has leaked from Brigette’s delicious pussy

I understand what he wanted...needed!!! I love licking my wifes clit while she's getting a good fucking from another man and when he's ready to cum, pulling out of my wife and letting me swallow his cock and have him shoot his load down my throat!

An easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s. Very well written. I love the sex scene descriptions. Incredibly exciting, especially with all the second thoughts she had after the act. She was truly a loving wife. You’re good !

My wife let me worship her and eat mens cum from her. I always thanked her and them for letting me taste their gifts.

Hot great story.

A Very erotic, well written story! She has to be a very loving wife to go from being reluctant and uncertain to very much on board and passionate about being taken by her new lover. The husband is a gem for condoning this. You're clearly one of the best writers on this site, Digger Dave!