All Comments on 'A Creative Challenge Ch. 26'

The hunter turns into the hunted.

The reader turns into the author.

I had wondered how you were able to write one story each day. Now all is revealed!

That's a very significant challenge you are giving to your readers and an interesting explanation of your recent writing history.

I have wondered where you were going with these people. I thought maybe you would bring the gallery owner into the sex games. Or maybe a male significant buyer. Or both.

But these two don't seem to be the flagrantly amoral types for group sex (too bad, but there you are).

Amy gets called away to a foreign major inheritance? No.

The local govt defines all their work as pornography and they get sent up for life in separate prisons?

HIV breaks out?

In real life they might just sort of gradually drift apart as he progresses exploring his talents and changing techniques. Amy finishes her schooling at wherever, gets a fabulous job and has to move into a real career.

Or, best for us readers, time stands still and they simply continue on having outragous sexual encounters frequently screwing in minute detail which you describe with exquisite vocabulary.

I'm confident you'll find a much better solution than any of the above.

Cheers

Terrible Thomas

A lite note from a fan in Norway. Just wanted to say I read all the chapters so far in only one night.. Well.. It's moning now, since it's half past six, but I haven't been able to put your story away. This isn't really erotica, this is litterature. The eroticism is there! Oh, yes! But the story is more than just that, and that's what makes it so good. Again, thank you for a wonderfull tale. Please write more.

Hugs from Ebcas

I'm constantly amazed when I find a genuinely good writer on this site. Even though alot of the stories on this site 'do it for me' just fine, most are still terrible example of fiction. Your work is actually very good all the way around. Keep up the good work. Hell. Try to get published.

... it's really good to find someone who can write well on this site. I like a lot of the stories, but so few of the writers actually know how to use the English language properly - and someone whose spelling, grammar and overall style are good is a true rarity.

But where to go? Ah, me, now that's difficult. Offhand, I can only think of one real answer - ask the characters, and let them tell you what happened to them ...

I have read many erotic stories in the past. This is my first time to comment on one. I don't have the words to desribe the feelings that your story has brought out in me. This is beyond any doubt the best writing I've seen on this or any other site, period. Please continue the excellent work.

This has been one of the best group of stories I have read in a long time. I felt I was right there with the characters. Lookinf forward to more of the continuing adventures of Amy and Sam.

I have really enjoyed all 25 chapters and hope that you will use your talents to keep Sam and Amy together for many more chapters. In lieu of that, please bring your reading public some new characters.