by taboototeach
The typical length for a story here is 3 to 4 times this length. This is too short to really get into it
Even at 30% annual rate, which is incredibly high, the interest on $20,000 in credit card debt would be $6,000 per year, or $500 per month. Not $4000 per month.
I hope there will be a sequel or 6 including more on her friend.
what has happened to part two of this story? Are you going to write irt or can solmeone else continue it?
The first person she actually accepts is one of her students, and she doesn't realise until he leaves and says, "That was great Ms. Ashford!"