All Comments on 'A Cruel Student's Intentions'

I enjoyed this story quite abit, but it seemed rushed. Great first timer bdsm action.

It was a good read but I would prefer if the story was longer and there was a little more anguish between the time Miss, Clark actually relents and submits to her student. In the future please be a little more descriptive. The sex scenes were so brief.

I look forward to a second chapter. Keep writing.

The characters actions seemed unwarranted. Or implausible. Lacked any type of cleverness that would draw the reader into the story and make them care about the people populating the story. In the end, who cares what happened. One other suggestion - Take a better picture of yourself. The one in your Bio was kinda scary looking.