All Comments on 'A-Cup Angst Ch. 13'

Love the story you are telling, can hardly wait for each new chapter.

Just so everyone knows, I'm going ahead and giving this 5-stars -- and I haven't even read the chapter yet

;)

I love this story and I am always looking forward to the next chapter. I hope in the next chapters we will see more of what happened to the girls after they were freed.

I really like your Aldo character. A cooky elder who gets it over on Jamie so much and messes with his head so splendidly. He rather reminds me of that Betty White show "Off Their Rockers."

...Hmm...

There was something else I'd wanted to comment on, but it's completely slipped my mind.

Anyway, keep up the great work. We're all already looking forward to the next entry!

I've enjoyed this story as it has progressed. Unfortunately, one thing keeps ruining it for me. Jamie's continued reversion to whiny bitch mode.

Suggesting your protagonist faces ethical dilemmas is fine. However, this constant "Ready. Fire. Aim. Bitch" cycle has become as annoying as George R R Martin's inability to complete a plot point.

As always, I liked the chapter very much!