All Comments on 'A-Cup Angst'

✰✰✰✰✰, but don't get silly with the bimbo shit; that's just boring.

I agree, dont get silly with the bimbo stuff. I do love the idea of him turning the tables on them though. I also hope you dont let us hang to long for the next chapters. ty/ bill

Taking the stupid bimbo thing too far is a quick way to kill a story. A harem of smart, motivated, dedicated slaves can make a master's life wonderful, but a bimbo requires constant maintenance.

No problem with some harsh payback, but keep it "real".

Good solid writing and an entertaining premise. Very much looking forward to the next installment!

to be a chapter 2 or do you plan to write a sequel under a different title? That's assuming you are going to write more to this story. If you are not, can someone else pick up where you left off? And if you are going to write an ending here, do you take sugestions or ideas from the readers?

As far as this story goes, I'm in agreement that turning Sonya into a powerless bimbo does take away from the story. It limits choices, which limits where and how farbyou can take the story.

DB71

I love this story of yours and will be eagerly awaiting the next installment(s).

However, I also echo the others' sentiments about bimbification. Like Ferrumitzal said, smart, motivated, and dedicated slaves are vastly more stimulating than mindless bimbos.

That said, I also like the fact that this bimbification is punishment / revenge for having been particularly shitty to him. After all, the bitches (Sonya and Helena) absolutely do deserve it.

Therefore, my recommendation is that you allow Jamie to revel in this little bit of sadism, but also keep it in check and don't go overboard with it. You actually left yourself with the necessary opening.

- "her ability to concentrate on things other than sex **or fulfilling his orders**."

If one of his orders is something like "always take care of me, yourself, and your sister slaves," then that could mean she'd usually be able to use a pretty decent amount of her brain, without being able to concentrate on anything he doesn't want her to.

I have a definite second chapter in mind, I just need a day to myself to type it up.

And I'm not going to find one until the hollidays pass.

The bimbification I had in mind was a little different than the ones you can usually find on this site. You'll have to wait until chapter two to see how it goes.

A sneak peek of chapter two?

Jamie and Helena butt heads and the winner takes all!

The story lost me when his price of Sonya was the destruction of the teen girl's entire future.

Not only beyond harsh, but ridiculously impractical.

Also, while it is your story, a universal trope in magic stories is that Real love cannot be forced.

J

amazing!

damn this is the best WTF story ever... i honestly think you came up with a more convincing soft magic system than most high budget movies ...

Wonderful story! Mean girls turned slave girls...with big boobs. Perfect!