by FeverDreamer
I enjoyed the offhand cynicism of the opening part so much that I would not have minded if the sexual content turned out to be weak. In fact it was sizzling. Thanks for a great story!
Btw, there is an error (perhaps a typo) around para 4. "Leant" is a part of the verb "to lean." It should have read "lent," which is a part of the verb "to lend."
Dude this rocked! A little funny and not taking itself too seriously but still damn hot!
More, please, more!
You are the real deal........Take a bit more time with your ouline, a little more character development and a touch more enviromental paint......take your time and write write write.....
Ever heard of CFNM beliefs? Clinical depression is unheard of, among sexually satisfied male students, beyond early puberty? Naturally they remain actively docile, with female dominance, throughout adolescence!
I have never been inclined to request sequels to stories, feeling sequels often don't live up to originals, but based on your other work I can confidently say I'm hoping to see a sequel to this one, whether it be a continuation of this family's story or the introduction of a new family. Great job!
I think another episode is needed, especially if the sisters get into the action.
Perhaps his cock stops growing, but stays hard most to the time and he can satisfy both of his sisters and his mom with a never ending supply of sperm.
Thanks for the good story
jackson hendrix- a woman name!!?
gladys- a japanese name!!?
what more i read in this story?
It was an interesting story, but if the son's cock, is as large as you hinted, There is no way the mother was going to be able to take it, being a virgin in that area, drugs or no drugs. I think that is you that has the anal fetish, not the son in the story.
For such a fun and interesting start, this was a dud of an incest story for me. Get real; huge cocks, weird names and enough poor editing to throw me off. Guess it just wasn't enough to rock my boat.
Never mind, "Biskit", no imagination, lol. Keep up your very intriging story. There different drugs that our western society has no idea that it exists or how long they've been around, most would make lsd or canibus seem like koolaid or wheetabix.
I like where you're going but it needs more detail about the doctors influence. What was in the tea? Were they Hypnotised? What is the doctor getting out of it?
I just can't understand why your stories are not higher rated. I hardly ever say this but this one needs a sequel. It's a great story in itself but there's so much you could do with the premise and it's such a hot context I think a sequel is entirely necessary. Needless to say, 5/5.
You got it right. I (we) don't need to read boring descriptions of drugs etc. It was well paced and intriguing; a good read and very sexy.
I am voting five - and I am not being generous... it is a five without question. Well done, though it does require another chapter or two (perhaps three)... because I am sure we (collectively) would like to read more of this.
Congratulations.
what can I say one of the horniest stories I have read hmmm please write more
Looms lime you haven't submited in awhile, but great story. I could see a follow up story or two, ending in a 4 way with the mother, son and daughters.
Change the last sentance to:
"Yes," Jackie cleared her throat, "Sharon, what is your opinion on sex with animals?"
drug, it just seemed to make them horny. How did it make the characters overcome the incest taboo?
Nice story, for sure, however I would love to see the 'Doctor' get physically involved with the mom and son, right there in the office. Her secretary might even join in on the fun.