by TxRad
Could this possibly work as a series ? Seems like an interesting opening to one.
Too bad there isn't a sequel, I think would have been a great start to a 5 or 6-story series.
What a great story, a five star fantasy in my book. Great visual descriptions and a few nice twists!
Great story :) - hope you'll continue this. Would really like to hear of their continued adventures . ..
A very good read... you really have a gift for writing. Keep up the Great work!
But, glad of this introduction.
If any other writer can produce similar imaginative stories, then I'm hooked.
An awesome way to combat evil: I'm down with that! A great story by a imaginative writer- thanks for sharing!
Enjoyed the twists and turns. I was fighting the devil right along with Dan and Angelic with one hand while scrolling with the other. Sorry the story ended when it did but it'll be a while before I can help them banish another devil :)
That's what I like, imagination with sex, heaven and hell and a beautiful woman! awesome story!
Great; tense, fast, interesting characters and plot. I'd like to see more of this tail ;) ! meanwhile I'm reading more of your stories !
Sill it was a great read. Well written and a lot of fun. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Major Cajones
This is a unique story with a compelling plot. I can't wait to see where this one goes.
This was not at all what I was expecting, and I loved it even more for that. Great characters and good job keeping the pace up throughout the story.