All Comments on 'A Dangerous Girlfriend'

place this crap in the LW category.

1 star at the utmost possible chance for a rating

Ok, where's the story??

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What, where, how, and when. Where is the story.

"Stories" (and I use the term loosely) like this are why Literotica should have a zero stars vote option.

Nice little story with at least three philosophies. U don't have to marry and egotistically breed to have a good life. There are a hell of a lot of women available, and u don't screw married women. Simple. Good. Room for a follow up.

Nice little cautionary tale, not a bad idea to know a person, and also know a little bit about that person before jumping into bed with them.

This didn't have an ending. It just stopped.

MichaelG

There were signs pointing to things weren't quite right with Sarah. He chose to ignore them for some convenient ass. I understand they weren't serious but Sarah did say in the beginning she was involved with someone.

A bit short but to the point. He did the right thing. ***** . A longer story like this would be perfection.

Read it again, and this time don't miss any words.

Sarah is out, Carol is in.

Simple as that.

4*

If I understood well Sarah's husband found a new woman with kids and they divorced so the character avoided to know baseball bat. My relative was in prison for deadly heavy machin accident and he divorced his wife after the prison. He found newer girfriend.

but I believe he doesn't hold too much with stupidity, TK U MLJ LV NV

Well written, short and simple another new take on my girlfriend is married good Job

For the short and sweet read.

But Nicky and her husband are not his friends and he is always going to looking over his shoulder.

In the real world this is a very possible situation.

I am sure Sarah's friend new she was married and the husband was in prison. Perhaps she felt sorry for her and set up the dinner blind date.

When you meet a new partner you do nor necessary know their history. !

Thanks for all the comments, especially from those who understood the story. For those who did not, if I write again I will try to make the storyline plainer.

Mitch

Pete and Nicky should have given you a heads up about her marital situation.

The title doesn't match the story. I saw NO real danger in it.

Find a day job when you get out of 9th grade and cling to it.

Can't trust none of these LW women.

...is what I was feeling when I got to the end.

I was looking for another page or another chapter.

Some commenters (including the author) felt it was a complete story, having made a good point.

I'm just telling how I felt at the end.

I disagree with the commenter who saw no connection between the title and the story. A jealous husband who knows his wife cheated on him, could be quite dangerous to her lover -- a fear that would be amplified by husband's history -- my lands, he went to prison for violence.

I'd be feeling UNeasy if I were in his shoes.

Paul in Oklahoma