All Comments on 'A Dare Worth Taking Ch. 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I enjoyed the story

It was really very well done, but I really wanted to see Jenny and Brenda get it on. Oh well. There were also a few times that you wrote one girl's name when you meant the other one. (He-he)

Dirty_Old_Man3Dirty_Old_Man3over 18 years ago
Excellent job!

A suggestion for the next chapter:

Brenda needs to participate with Jen and her boyfriend; maybe a game of Truth or Dare between Jen and Brenda alone, leading to both of them getting together and the boyfriend sneaking in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Excellent

I really enjoyed both of the chapters. I also liked the way you had two perspectives on the events. Great Job.

PJPerkinPJPerkinover 15 years ago
Great

A really fun, sexy, easy to read story; writen with imagination and flair.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

FUCKIN HOT!!!!!!!!!

monaatnightmonaatnightabout 13 years ago
A Dare Worth Taking Ch. 2

I wish that my first time had been as good as that......Love your style.....you leave it open for my imagination to get into gear and play with it.....Mona

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxalmost 12 years ago
Well written

Excellent structure and eroticism. Just mixed up the names at one point.

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