by theowlandtherose
It was really very well done, but I really wanted to see Jenny and Brenda get it on. Oh well. There were also a few times that you wrote one girl's name when you meant the other one. (He-he)
A suggestion for the next chapter:
Brenda needs to participate with Jen and her boyfriend; maybe a game of Truth or Dare between Jen and Brenda alone, leading to both of them getting together and the boyfriend sneaking in.
I really enjoyed both of the chapters. I also liked the way you had two perspectives on the events. Great Job.
A really fun, sexy, easy to read story; writen with imagination and flair.
Thank you.
I wish that my first time had been as good as that......Love your style.....you leave it open for my imagination to get into gear and play with it.....Mona
Excellent structure and eroticism. Just mixed up the names at one point.