All Comments on 'A Dark Hotel Room'

I liked your story. It was very touchy-feely and atmospheric but if I have a crit it was that it felt as if it started in the middle. I want a bit more background. Who are these people? What are they to one another? What was the 'show'? It had the feel of a story that followed on from something else, to me, but there are no other stories.

Give me more. *grin*