All Comments on 'A Dark Tale Ch. 05'

by SylviaG

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 6 years ago
Better and better

This is such a well done series about the travails of a woman of easy virtue (so to speak) who seems to be looking for relationships that are doomed from the get go. She manages to fool herself often enough, but I'm sure deep down she knows. Few people seem to understand her behavior, even if the men are happy enough to exploit her sexual willingness to share her lovely body, nor even do they care about her. She just does not have a proper place in a complicated but ultimately unforgiving society. You get all that packed into your stories and frankly, my dear, it's impressive. JB

trashcan44trashcan44almost 6 years ago
I hope.......

I hope it doesn't end here! Poor Sylvia, what ever shall become of her? I'm a sucker for a happy ending but I'm not betting on it! Very well written.

kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 6 years ago

This continues to be a great story. I liked the rape scene, where Geoffrey helped himself to what he's been fantasising over for weeks. Sylvia enjoyed it too, if only she would be honest with herself and admit it.

Where's this tale going next? This can't be the end, surely?

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