All Comments on 'A Darkening Soul Ch. 14-19'

I did enjoy reading the continuation of this story, if only becasue it reminded me how much i enjoyed the prior chapters. I do have to say though that these chapters pushed the limits of me suspending my disbelief, and so it fell short. The ending was too over the top.

I agree with the anon below. WAYYYYY over the top.......BUT it was a fun read.

Best written story I've ever read on this site. Not all that believable but well written, and internally consistent.

N interesting read and enjoyable.

This is the best series I have read.

Will you ever continue the story.

I truly enjoyed this story i'm sad to see it end

To echo the above (below?) Comment I'm sad to see this series go. I really truly enjoyed the concept.

If anything I would love to see the series get a rework adding additional details and fixing minor grammar and spelling errors.

But you can consider me one of your fans after that read.

So much fun throughout! And so much yummy sex! Thank you!

Really enjoyable read, sad that it ended would love to see another couple of chapters about Lucy getting to the UN.

I loved this and would love to see it continue. Please grant my wish for more

I have read multiple stories you have written. It's nice to see a "connected universe" with places used in different stories and characters mentioned as well. Very well done!

Please don't continue. Will's solutions are those of fascism and revenge. While renge may feel effective while being carried out, the action of doing what evil doers have done make revenge evil too. Will does evil and democracy cannot be saved by doing evil. Doing right means doing good. Raping rapists does not make the world better.

So many examples of human trash in this story. The frat guys, the dean (especially her), her minions. They all got off too lightly in my opinion. Anal Cherry sounds like a fucking horribly cruel game, but perfect for revenge on those sick bastards. Can't believe someone would actually do that to a girl, jeez.

Aside from those unsavoury elements, the story was good and entertaining. I enjoyed it.

Utterly Absurd… and great FUN!!!

5 stars