All Comments on 'A Date With Brittni'

Very romantic and love the open ended ending for more fun. Of course 5 stars from me after our great date!

I'm going to kick you in the balls and her in her too

Who could resist such a beautiful young lady? Really enjoyed your detailed description of your perfect date. Rated 5 Stars. Looking forward to reading about your next date and what kinks Brittni will bring to the fore and how they will entice you into more rod thrusting!

You lost me the moment I read the word "your" in the first sentence. The use of 2nd person POV is a turnoff for most readers. Assuming that at least half of the potential readers here are male, myself included, we cannot relate to your premise. Sorry.

A marvelously intimate tryst with a marvelously sexy woman. Could feel every caress, lick and fuckstroke of her body as you made love to her. Your ability to describe details is strong... more please!

Very well written story with good descriptors.

to be enjoyable. There's describing in detail what your doing, aaaaaaand then there's dissecting, over analyzing--- as well as providing exacting terminology in an effort for me to completely lose my erection.

Cut 27 paragraphs out of it and just fuck the shit out of her.

Not very erotic

Beautifully written, erotic, just a lovely story of a man and a woman making love. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thank you.

wonderful love story, but too short!

Is brittni on birth control