All Comments on 'A Date With Mandy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Impressive

Great characters! More, please. Mandy needs a strong hand. How will Jon react?

redlion75redlion75over 8 years ago

i would be pissed.does mandy like him for him or because she was told to?why would his friend put him in this set-up without his say so?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Lol

"Hey Mandy!"

"Hi Jon!"

"So how are--"

"Sorry to interrupt, but just to let you know up front I don't want to have sex with you or kiss you."

"...Nice to meet you, Mandy. Have a nice day."

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story!

Very original, well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

interesting plot idea

well written ..

sadly we only get a tiny look at this most complex relationship

and the story ends almost before it starts

for that reason i can understand why it has not scored / rated higher .

voted 4 stars .. but this could have so easily been developed into a four or five page favorite & literotica classic

Celibate1Celibate1over 8 years ago
Ditto.

A very good introduction of the characters, but if it is intended as a stand alone story there are too many plot and character threads left unresolved to be satisfying. I hope to see the next (few) chapters soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Have to agree with redlion

If someone is dating you, but isn't in control of themselves, then it's no different from being pimped out to you. I would hand her the key and tell her to call me when she is in control of her life.

Zanen12Zanen12over 8 years ago
Loved it but sad

I had a lot of fun reading and getting to know the characters but I was sad that their was no sex! At the end, I also can see this story getting more reads and higher rates if you continue this into a series. So will their be a continuation? If so then I will be very excited and can't wait.

JoTaKuSanJoTaKuSanabout 7 years ago
WHY????????

WHY WOULD YOUR START A STORY AND NOT FINISH IT YOU LEFT ME BLUE BALLS!!!!!

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