by Contrarian
Great characters! More, please. Mandy needs a strong hand. How will Jon react?
i would be pissed.does mandy like him for him or because she was told to?why would his friend put him in this set-up without his say so?
"Hey Mandy!"
"Hi Jon!"
"So how are--"
"Sorry to interrupt, but just to let you know up front I don't want to have sex with you or kiss you."
"...Nice to meet you, Mandy. Have a nice day."
interesting plot idea
well written ..
sadly we only get a tiny look at this most complex relationship
and the story ends almost before it starts
for that reason i can understand why it has not scored / rated higher .
voted 4 stars .. but this could have so easily been developed into a four or five page favorite & literotica classic
A very good introduction of the characters, but if it is intended as a stand alone story there are too many plot and character threads left unresolved to be satisfying. I hope to see the next (few) chapters soon.
If someone is dating you, but isn't in control of themselves, then it's no different from being pimped out to you. I would hand her the key and tell her to call me when she is in control of her life.
I had a lot of fun reading and getting to know the characters but I was sad that their was no sex! At the end, I also can see this story getting more reads and higher rates if you continue this into a series. So will their be a continuation? If so then I will be very excited and can't wait.
WHY WOULD YOUR START A STORY AND NOT FINISH IT YOU LEFT ME BLUE BALLS!!!!!