All Comments on 'A Daughter's Love Ch. 04'

You write well, Elizabethhart.

I really like the characters. They make sense and are consistent. Not to mention, this chapter was hott! Love it! Please continue.

You have a gift for describing erotically ;-)

I like the fact that the father didn't act like a total dick head n fucked her in the limo again unlike most stories that portray fathers as a sex craze for their daughters n saw nothing wrong with it......hope they fall in love though ;)