All Comments on 'A Daughter's Love Ch. 05'

I love the revenge aspect so far. You still need a good proof reader though . . . .

Enjoying the story so far.. The narrative depicts fantasy and that's sweet!

The sexual tension is so smoking hot! Your writing is excellent! Please keep writing!

Great story. Where does she go from here? I think she meant to use Microsoft as the competition. Good Job!

Enjoying the story so far. You should get someone to proof read these before posting though. And correct where you have used the name Microsoft with Microprose.