by Elizabethhart
Personally, I think this is a good place to end the story. You've tied up your plot, destroyed the villains, rewarded the protagonist, and I don't see where else you could take it without destroying Elise's integrity.
OH. MY. GOD. This whole storyline is AMAZING!! I can’t even begin to describe what this story did to me! Oh my god this is so fucking hot!!
So he abandons her (as far as she knows), and then he just shows up at her door and is immediately able to charm his way into her pants? It was a great story up until that part.
OK, where to start. Do people really pass out from sex? I don't really think so. Why the need for the tears by all parties? I can't believe that someone as hard-case as Culver and his daughter would hardly break down and shed a tear when confronted. And why did Culver seem to instantly cave? He would undoubtedly pull out all the stops and fight back tooth and nail. Also, I suspect he has video of Leslie and dear old Dad going at it in dad's office. That would certainly obviate the incest bias Leslie perceived from the judge. Speaking of Leslie; considering all of the animus she supposedly held towards Dad, why would she simply crumple the instant he knocked on her door (unannounced). Since she was living in a penthouse don't they have any lobby check in security? Oh well. On to the next chapter . . . .
Sorry for the name foul-up on my last comment. Switch Elise (daughter) for Leslie. My bad.