by Elizabethhart
Your writing has gotten me so hot and bothered! But this is really a really good story. I like how you have developed the characters, with a strong woman who is an equal.
You have quickly gotten me addicted to seeing a brand new chapter everyday :D
Well, I really like this story. However, there are multiple errors, extra words, etc. Still a five, but it made reading difficult at times. The great story overrode them, but try a proofreader.
Keep it moving along, it is a bit unusual for the daughter father incest line of story and I am enjoy ing it but need hotter sex for this Daughter!!