All Comments on 'A Daughter's Love Ch. 07'

by Elizabethhart

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Outstanding!

Your writing has gotten me so hot and bothered! But this is really a really good story. I like how you have developed the characters, with a strong woman who is an equal.

MoraroseMoraroseover 11 years ago

You have quickly gotten me addicted to seeing a brand new chapter everyday :D

imurddyimurddyover 11 years ago
I,

Well, I really like this story. However, there are multiple errors, extra words, etc. Still a five, but it made reading difficult at times. The great story overrode them, but try a proofreader.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice!

Keep it moving along, it is a bit unusual for the daughter father incest line of story and I am enjoy ing it but need hotter sex for this Daughter!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Such a lovely read....

ToughSailorToughSailor5 months ago

CLOYING ! "Do you know if you're pregnant? Oh please, don't go there . . . .

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