All Comments on 'A Daughter's Present'

It was cute quick and the way he spoke make it hot. Nothing elaborate like some novels on here, just a something quick to get us off. Lovely. 5/5!!

The story is good and I gave it a 5!! Your story is good, just say fuck you to the asshole of LIT dear annony. LIT should block this fool

very good , I loved it !!!!

Italics for dialogue? Really?

Where's chapter 2???? So hot!

I'm so glad you guys liked it!

I'll probably write another, and I'll certainly not use italics for dialogue, sorry about that.

This made me Cum for the first time ... i usually get close but not fully Cum, I'm a virgin ... amazing

Why is your spell checker turned off? Typos make you look ignorant when with today's technology there's no reason to have typos. I stopped reading as soon as I spotted the first typo.