All Comments on 'A Day at the Beach'

by Gudrun

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SeductionLoverSeductionLoverover 13 years ago
Very Nice

Only suggestion would be more dialogue. A nice sequel would be a look at the afternoon from the perspective of the younger woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hugs

It sounds wonderful.

Hugs

Paula

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wonderful

That was so wonderfully erotic. Love the lactation lesbian theme. Bloody wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
New & XXXciting

Love the excitement that builds when people take time to really observe as they explore - feel and enjoy rather than rush - and all with loving smiles :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
agree

Yes, would have been even better with a little more dialog.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Extremely Hot!

I loved this story, thank you for sharing it with us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That is what I am talking about! nice hardcore oral sex with plenty of passion..YES!!

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