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by daztec2010

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Second Person Naratives Are Difficut To Accomplish

This was not real succesful that way. Try rewriting it in Third Person Omnipotent. How does the husband know the thoughts of the other actors in second person?

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Hope the cheating whore's cheekies got sunburned.

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