by rembrandt
as much as I tried to explain to my boyfriend the way I feel when he agrees to spank me past the playful stage, it wasn't until I showed him this story that he understood... now I must write him my own version of our next time -- hope it's soon!!!
this was such a touchingly candid and heartfelt example of what a severely spanked submissive woman feels. i enjoyed it incredibly much.
I enjoyed the way the author built up the story. I thought it was a good read.
Bugger - I managed to press the first star by mistake just now. Please ignore that. I thought it was terrific, hit all my tender spots!
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perspective and well done! I'm assuming you did research on the pov as your bio shows u as male and this is a female pov. Not a criticism -- just an observation. I gave u a 5 as 'bendovernow' (see below) says they messed up and gave u a 1. otherwise it would've been a 4 from me. Thanks for a really good read. I'll be reading more of you as I totally adore 'spank' stories. Take care...