by Nonvanillamae
Well done!!!! Give us some more, maybe on the same theme---trials and tribulations of a single girl living alone.
your language skills are commentable... first rate fiction material..
It's nice to finally read a story that has the attacker USE the knife. He dsnt just wave it around. He actually uses it. PROPS!!!
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The things he did with that knife got me so fucking hot. FANTASTIC JOB.
Peace and please keep up the damn near perfect work,
~A Fan
your writing style seems forced, like you are trying to sound a certain way instead of letting it flow from you like a conversation. Maybe you will get better with practice.