All Comments on 'A Day Like No Other'

by Nonvanillamae

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
a nonny mouse

Well done!!!! Give us some more, maybe on the same theme---trials and tribulations of a single girl living alone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nice language..

your language skills are commentable... first rate fiction material..

secretrapefantasysecretrapefantasyabout 16 years ago
nice

It's nice to finally read a story that has the attacker USE the knife. He dsnt just wave it around. He actually uses it. PROPS!!!

^^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Oh my gosh....

The things he did with that knife got me so fucking hot. FANTASTIC JOB.

Peace and please keep up the damn near perfect work,

~A Fan

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
seems forced

your writing style seems forced, like you are trying to sound a certain way instead of letting it flow from you like a conversation. Maybe you will get better with practice.

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