All Comments on 'A Day on the Lake'

I like stories involving an older woman seducing a younger woman, I also like stories that involve a dominant/submissive relationship between two women. Your story fits the bill with both of these.

At first I was a little put off by Peggy as a predator but was quickly enthralled with the tenderness, sexyness and honesty of the story. Great read!

I loved the way you slowly built the intensity. Well done. Are you planning to continue this story because I believe that it has grat possibility

i agree with rbenne, this is an excellent opening chapter please, please let us have some more about these two.

I would have liked a bit more reluctance from Madeline. Just my opinion. Otherwise, it was quite nice.

mmmmmm 2 be madeline and be "taken", made to worship her ass,,, ooo yum

looking for more, love your stories

warmly

carrie

Please continue this story!

Thank you,

L

Hallo Dumpington!

Can you believe a hard ass dyke, is a sucker for romantic stories, and that's the truth!

Of your stories I have read so far, "A Day on the Lake" is my favorite,,,yes!

I wish I could give you more, but 5-Stars is all I can give.... So it is 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms,,, all the way!!!

Thank-You, from a hard ass dyke fan.

Gay Kat.

This is my lowest-rated Literotica story, but I certainly enjoyed writing it nonetheless. I especially enjoy writing those stories involving older, somewhat butchy, and more-dominant lesbian ladies preying upon beautiful, younger, and more submissive girls that they can seduce, undress, & play with!