All Comments on 'A Daydream of Simply Red'

by ViXxXNKisses

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showhershowheralmost 17 years ago
Beautiful!

This is surreal poetry from an author whom is deeply in love or from an author who is in love with making love. Or . . . both!

I don’t think I’ve heard the act of lovemaking so beautifully described.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I almost

don't know what to say because the other commenter said what I was thinking so I will just leave you some praise.

You are obviously an intelligent and imaginative writer, rather than one with just a dirty mind and basic litery skills.

Portrayed beautifully, thank you for sharing this piece.

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