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Anonymousover 5 years agoAbsolute crap....
....crap writing, crap continuity, crap content.
You should become a professional writer - then you could starve like you deserve.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI couldn't even finish the first paragraph. Found myself cringing at the misspelling, switching of first and third persons and bad grammar.
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