All Comments on 'A Deal's a Deal'

Please continue writing, very entertaining.

I marched with a California corps for three years back in the 1970s. Your story brought back some old memories and fantasies. Thanks!

I cannot tell you how much I really, really enjoyed reading this story! You truly brought back memories, and stoked some fantasies. Thank again!

YOMEYO

Aww, thank you. So sweet. :) xoxo

I love this story and all your others. Very fun, not to mention sexy. How have I missed these?

Fun Read, enjoyed it

Did you march a summer? What summer? What corps?

Great story! I want to give a 5 to Ravishing Renee also, but there's no place to score it on that site.

Awww thanks! I confess that I have a thing for color guard girls ever since I was one. This story and Ravishing Renee are two of my favorites because they are just a tiny bit autobiographical. I'll let you imagine which parts of the stories are based on me. As far as the ratings go, I tend to turn them off when they hover around 4.5 just so I don't obsess over whether it has the "hot" tag or not. Ratings are not an indication of quality writing, I know, but I'm a feisty ginger girl with some vanity issues. :) xoxo Daphne

Your story really took public nudity to a delicious level. I loved that it left us to fill in the rest of the story with our imagination.

WOW

Very good stroke story, well thought out and written with plenty of angst, drama and sex. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memory?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

loved it that was so bloody HOT!!!!