All Comments on 'A Debt to be Paid'

Love this seduction. More, please!!!

For being so short it was a great story. Loved it. Any chance of a sequel?

this definitely needs to continue , Please , Please ?

Please continue, you did a great job!

This was very good, please, please write the next chapter.

I loved the story, but it was WAY too short

Looking forward to more. You captured the mood really well and created some real heat! Keep it up - I hope she will too! Lol

I have been used by a few trans guys in my time .. loved this story

Great story. I like the adventures of formerly-straight men who get bent over. There is an element of surprise and humiliation, even shame. This works best for me when the new cock-sucker performs in front of friends or relatives, who further add to his humiliation.

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Keep going. Longer if you can. This was hot wanted more

More please. Now all I can think about is her fucking my ass and I need it bad.

We all can dream and you help, darling!

Great Story, so hot!! Really hoping for more chapters in the future!!! 5 Stars!

Great story. Hope there’s more.

need more please

Great story love it, more please. Make Chris beg for her cock

Amazing story!!!!

very good story love it.

Please keep up the great writing.

Great story keep it going.

loved the story, hope there is a part 2

'Chris stood there a moment, still horny and confused'

Although my name is not Chris, I felt completely like him, when I reached the end of the page.

Waiting for the second part!

Does Rachel make Chris dress as a girl? Does she make him suck off other men? I would love to have a tranny girlfriend who would make me dress as a girl

Please hurry and write the next one.

I love it when a shemale talks to you like that making you feel like a little bitch

Please continue this story.

It's excellent!

My name is Chris and i LOVE this story, and it has amazing potential as a series.

KEEP IT GOIN!

A fantastic start. Hopefully you'll continue with this.

really good story. where is the next chapter

You can't write a story that good and leave me hanging like that! I want more!!!!!

I thought this was a great introduction into what could be a great long running story. As Chris begins to think more about Rachel I could see them exploring more of their dominant and submissive sides to each other. I think Chris may have a little bit of a thing for feet as well, seeing how much attention he pays to them, would love to see that explored more. Overall great start, I just hope you make more like this cause it was awesome.

Sorry dominant trans is hot, but not if they are too mean, assaultive, or demeaning.

I definitely look forward to a part 2

I want MORE!

Brilliant!

I hope you are alive and well. While it would be great for you to write more (about this story or others), I really just hope you are alive and able to use your writing skills anywhere in the world.

Such a shame this story ends here. Great read, but I’m left wanting more.

need to continue this story