by AquaHolic0120
What a hot, erotic story. You craft your stories extremely well, developing the characters thoroughly before culminating with the climax! I am a big fan of your previous stories. I hope you decide to write additional chapters to this story.
Normally I don't post here but this was incredible. Seriously the best story I've seen here, the build up was well made. Was this already the last one, or do you tend to make a side story of this chapter? Just please continue writing, you're really good at this!
Of more adventures of these three or maybe others in their lives. You have a wonderful way words that are delightful to read
You do have a way with words. The way you tease the reader as you build up the sexual tension in the story is intoxicating. I love the way you bring the story along slowly as if we were participating in the foreplay. Being 71, I can totally relate to Mr. Wilbur's dilemma of wondering if he could perform & satisfy a young and beautiful woman. It was carefully crafted with lots of character development, except it could have been hotter if her husband ate her sloppy pussy or fucked her through Mr. Wilber's copious cum load. More fodder for additional chapters? Loved it, a 5.
Where is the story about him coming over for dinner and Adam stripping her for him and watching him fuck her? Adam could get it up her ass.
We need more.