by LSEiland
She keeps questioning his motives. I am glad she took this important step. Girl you know once you go to that man's house it is on and popping! LOL
Great come back, please don't take to long with the next chp....
Plllleasseeee don't take so long with another chapter I love this story!!
That was great .. I was checking daily for chapter four ! Definitely 5 stars .. Pleaseeee don't make us wait too long for chapter 5 ! I can't wait to see what happens with Elise
I'm scared to see what will happen when she finds out about his girlfriend
I'm glad you didn't do the obvious with this story and have them "hook up" during the wedding engagements. Seeing how long they can delay the physical aspect of their attraction and budding interest before the girlfriend arrives and news of the fresh breakup with the boyfriend will prove to be worthwhile. It's nice to see characters develop a relationship first before diving into the easy and expected. Sometimes people do give in to passions but it's nice to see the reservations each may have first.
All that I may request is...please don't take so long to update us readers and it's OK to have more than 2 or 3 pages. Yes, this may sound selfish and demanding, but it shows you have encouragers of your writing.
hope we dont have to wait to long for the next one , love this couple , next chapter pleaseeee!!!
I rated this 1 star because you never completed it and enough time has passed. It was a pretty good storyline but your lack of consideration warranted the poor rating.
... are all I can give as once again I am caught in the trap of an unfinished story. I actually did not even finish reading this chapter when I realised it was only two pages so chances are it would not be finished. I do hope you get to finish it though...
A year later and still unfinished. Is this karma because of how long I take to finish some of my own stories?
Please finish this!
PLEASE CONTINUE. I want to see them fall in love and have him give into the treasure between her legs
This is a prime example why I think the stories should all be done before submitting them, so they do not get completed. Something must have happened to the writer for it not have been completed for so long.