All Comments on 'A Degree of C Ch. 01'

Promising start.

Five.

Good start. Elise should kick her own ass. The guy only asked to show her around. There ain't nothing wrong with hanging out it doesn't have to be serious.

I will be looking out for more of this, Great start Ben and Elise both sound so yummy

Good start. Super curious why she declined the number. Maybe he's the person she's visiting in NY and that would have blown it? Anyhoo, this is a lot better than some of the tripe this category puts up.

This has always been fantasy of meeting a mouth watering fine man on a flight somewhere and we click. Of course it has never happen to me. But I love this story, so please give me more. Is Elise attached to someone or is she free to mingle? If she doesn't want Ben I do.

This is a good start to the story. I'm interested to see where you go from here.

Like it so far and it looks like its a good build up. I like the whole instant connection aspect of a story. Hope you continue. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Can't wait for the next update!

Just wanted to thank everyone who commented and/or read this first chapter. I wasn't sure if anyone would like it, so I'm glad to hear you are awaiting the next chapter. It will be posted soon.

I just wanted to stop by and say I really enjoyed reading this. It's been close to a year since I've written or read anything in this genre, but it had all of the elements that make up an enjoyable tale. Definitely look forward to reading more!

RaLa

Very good read. I could feel the chemistry between them, and this left me with wanting to read more. I'm looking forward to the update.

I had a similar experience back in 2009 when I flew through Houston on my to Ronald Reagan Airport in D.C. Sexy White man with the Justin Bieber comb-over sat next to me. I was reading a book that had an interracial couple (black woman/white man) on the front cover, while he was reading a political biography. Of course we hit it off--because I'm a political science graduate! It was TOO cute! Can't wait to see how this turns out!

Love the writing btw!!

*~*BlackWomynReader*~*

Love it please add a chapter 2 soon!!!

I really like Ben already... think i'll keep tabs on this story. Hope you update soon

Hey, AMHJ89... Ch. 02 was posted today! I'm glad you like Ben, he will only get sweeter with time.

I really like this story so far

So cute already. Would love me some Ben!

LOVE the end of this chapter. Ben's got game.