All Comments on 'A Demon's Lust Ch. 01'

Im curious to see where u take this

i love how this story ties in with "A Demon's Child." It makes you end up wondering if Saban became nicer to Anita and got along with her eventually or if he is actually trying to get to her slowly. I really like the idea of Saban softening to Anita slightly but at the same time he would quite happily see her suffer like when she was tied to the tree. Anyway great chapter. I love your work and am looking forward to more.

Yes, bring me morw...cant wait to get to th nxt chapter.... thanks for the treat :)

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Overall, this whole story is really good and I’m hooked. I’m unsure why it hasn’t gotten more attention and more comments. The idea of the demon beginning to feel or a human... it’s an endearing and romantic story. It could be amazing even... it would be better if Anita’s character was more flushed out. Anita is hard to like at first. The demon is so easy to like. The sex scenes would be better if they llasted longer and were even more descriptive. They can be fairly hot though. Regardless of all that, I can’t stop reading the series and went right into the next series, A Demon’s Child. I am glad it found it’s way to being a book.