All Comments on 'A Demon's Lust Ch. 05'

What happens in the other room this night? Love the thoughts in both of them. Love the chemistry.

I like how this is turning out, and looking forward to the next chapter.

i found this chapter quite intriguing! I don't think Saban loves Anita but he definitely cares for her and is possessive enough that he dosen't want her to be with anyone but him. Great chapter!

i freaking love this series! i read a demon's child and am absolutely ecstatic at the progress between anita and saban. their chemistry and unique dynamic makes me absolutely want more adventures from them. anita's quickly becoming my favorite character, majorly because of her stern and domineering personality. i'm quite tired of the normal cookie-cutter protagonist who's shown to be a sweet and pure sweetheart. she doesn't let saban push her around and even though saban has been noticeably softening towards her, he still keeps his dark, demonic ways.

i would love for there to be more of your series, and more of saban. i feel like he needs to be fleshed out a little bit more. also, while i already love the world you made, it feels like it's still in fragments. like i get a bit of an image how it is, but there's never really a description or history or whatever, where this world is and its rules etc etc

anyway, looking so forward to more!

Very short one, hoping for more character/relationship development in the next one. I like his jealousy and his protectiveness and her demeanor, but at the same time I hope you don't make him too soft and actually let him stay a dark enough character.

Also I am hoping for a role change soon, you know, in terms of the power relation.

Eeeeep omg you need to make the rest i want to see is anita and saban get together and have kids that would be fun to see

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