All Comments on 'A Desperate Mom Takes Charge Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Mom mentioned business

For a little teasing while. Talk about a fukin pick teaser.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Fantastic.

I really enjoy the way you write. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
your style

I enjoy your style . A lot of added information leading us to understand what is happening between you and your family robert

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

The intimacy, passion, sexual and emotional ties between mother and son are truly beautiful. I can imagine the look on Mark's face when he saw his mother after having sex with Heather after having waited for so long to be with Sandy. By is leaving, instead of saying anything to her, showed how mature he had become. This series is fantastic. Finally, Hank got exactly what he deserved and earned.

addi01edaddi01edover 1 year ago

I really appreciate the way you write, the intimacy passion and tension in the relationships.

I do have a problem with that last scene though. Mark gets lied to, cheated on,his trust betrayed and finally physically assaulted and tied up so he cannot escape yet it's all good!? Shouldn't there be Some consequences?

I do hope you keep writing, you have a gift for it.

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