All Comments on 'A Deviant Desire Ch. 02'

can I find people like this? You got me so hot that I've got to jerk off. I'll play with my sensitive male nipples and then stroke myself until I spurt out a huge gush of cum. Would write more, but I've got something better to do!

......and Rude.

Boring !!!

You've done better. Fix.

Tommy deserved a go at Kate as well as the maternal wonders, the lucky beggar.

It is almost as though you have lived every second of every character at some time of your life. I love it!

Chapter #2 is almost as good as chapter #1 !!!! I surely wanted Tom to get a bunch of Kate. It occured too me that Kate was pretty well versed in the actions needed to get in Mommys pants. I loved the 3way scene from #1, & kinda expected another like it at the lake.

Hoping there are more DD chapters coming!!

Tommy and Kate did not fuck? What a waste.

But not into lesbo crap 1 star

I’m somewhat bewildered by the Person’s comments/remarks. If your not into this Type story, why did you read it? I think it’s a beautiful story. Attraction, action and reaction. Yes there was some lesbian scenes as well as some straight scenes. The straight scenes were regarding incest but if your not into that either why were you reading stories in this section. Personally, I prefer these as (to me) they are very stimulating. Don’t get me wrong, I like any kind of straight, les, gay, bio, trans sex. - I just like sex and enjoy reading about others who also enjoy it. 5 *’s

Good story until all the lesbian shit started. A 2 at best.

How could you not want to read the story after an opening line like that. But only a four-star from me cos I'm not really into the lesbian stuff - hey, it's your story, you choose, I'm fine with that, especially as I came here from part 1.

Shame you're no longer writing. I guess Emma called ;). Hope you're having fun together

Good story. Would like to see this story expanded. So many possible sub[lpts. Only in fiction can you find so many people confidence in who and what they are. I find it refreshing when characters recognize that love has no boundaries and that nothing is forbidden. Only people have boundaries, not love. 5 star series.