All Comments on 'A Diary for Two Ch. 02'

i definitely like the story concept. I also like that you are developing the characters, as opposed to simply having gratuitous sex, though ultimately the sex needs to become part of the story to further explore Erik/Elise's feelings and emotions. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Good work. Interested in which direction you take this story.

Very similar circumstances to the manga story Ranma but i love that series so hope to continue reading your story.

Very interesting approach to things, but one thing that hasn't changed from most other gender change stories is the quick obsession with getting the right clothes -- that seems to be pretty much a constant, regardless of any other circumstances or changes.