All Comments on 'A Diary for Two Ch. 04'

I'm hooked on this series. The alternative viewpoints on everyday relationship issues interests me. I find the absence so far of plot distracting sex a plus, though I suspect I may be in the minority here; it is Literotica afterall.

One assumes there will be an inevitable 'coming out'. I'm looking forward to what form this takes and how the various characters handle it.

See my comment (the long one) from part 1. Great to see this is still proceeding fantastically well into part 4. The pub stuff was very well done and it is fun to see how the main characters are handling the various "oh shit" situations. The developing dynamic between Erik and Thomas is very interesting too but aha! a girl! I hadn't seen that one coming, this could get very funny in future episodes.

Advice: Screw that this is on this site. It doesn't matter. Carry on however you please and ignore people who want trash writing. There are thousands of other texts they can read for that.