All Comments on 'A Dirty TASK Needs Doing Pt. 04'

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DragonCoboltDragonCoboltabout 6 years agoAuthor
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Kimmy's cock size?

Nice story, definitely looking forward to what happens next.

Still, I think I may have spotted an inconsistency in Kimmy's cock size based on those two sentences:

"I mean, shit, I had a twelve inch dick"

vs.

"Well, melted save for the part of me, the sixteen inch part of me, that came to absolute fucking attention."

So, page one says Kimmy has a foot long dick, but in the next page it's referenced as being 16 inches long, which is a whole third longer. Can you clarify which one is actually correct? And if it isn't too much trouble, could you try describing the characters in a bit more detail, so every character gets a brief basic description such as body type, height, boob size / cock size? Well, considering we're talking erotica here the two latter ones are probably the more important ones.

Anyway, really interesting read, hopefully there are many more chapters to come. ;-)

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltabout 6 years agoAuthor
Kimmy's cock...

Kimmy's cock is a lot like Revi from Black Lagoon's shorts, save that rather than constantly getting shorter, it's constantly getting longer!

(But in seriousness, she's 12 inches)

AlexstrazaAlexstrazaabout 6 years ago
more

just more.make the sex scene last longer too. i cant come that quickly. please

Ella76Ella76almost 6 years ago
Entertaining Story!

Because I loved your “Naked Weapon” stories, I decided to read more of your submissions. This is the first Transsexual and Crossdresser story I have ever read – and am pleased to say that it is not what I expected it to be. I don’t know why Anonymous and Alexstraza are complaining. Seems there is pussy galore.

Hugs and Kisses from the Far North.

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltalmost 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, I couldn't think of a better place to put a story that was so intensely futanari.

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