All Comments on 'A Discovery Ch. 03'

by GeorgieH

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ScattySueScattySuealmost 10 years ago
You teaser!

Very good but too short! Want more please.

FullupwithitFullupwithitalmost 10 years ago
You have me drooling!

Very hot story! I loved the twist at the end of Ch 01 when you brought in Debbie. All I can say is MORE PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
a wonderful story ...

this is such a wonderful story. This is probably the way we all would like to feel in our own life ... Naked and free and in Love ...

Randee1958Randee1958about 8 years ago
Agree

I agree with anonymous. What he states is exactly how I feel for life in general. Bravo!!!😍😘

BlueYonder63BlueYonder63about 8 years ago
Fabulous

A lovely balance in your writing. The descriptions of their love making are so very hot, yet the description of their growing love is wonderfully heart warming.

OpenHeraOpenHeraabout 3 years ago

Great.

Short but great. Very hot

SummoreSummorealmost 3 years ago

A beautiful story of love

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Always searching. Now I'm back writing a lot as well. I want to thank everyone for some great feedback, and as promised, new chapters of all sorts of tales will appear very soon. I want to thank everyone who has taken the time to send me messages (mostly) of support, and I wan...

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