by GeorgieH
Very hot story! I loved the twist at the end of Ch 01 when you brought in Debbie. All I can say is MORE PLEASE!
this is such a wonderful story. This is probably the way we all would like to feel in our own life ... Naked and free and in Love ...
I agree with anonymous. What he states is exactly how I feel for life in general. Bravo!!!😍😘
A lovely balance in your writing. The descriptions of their love making are so very hot, yet the description of their growing love is wonderfully heart warming.