All Comments on 'A Discovery in Behavior'

Waiting for the next part !! Unusual concept warrants a follow-up, especially after the daughter's declaration in the conclusion. The possibilities are intriguing -- he could use the drug to seduce his daughter's girl-friends or perhaps he discovers that the drug didn't really work & his daughter was actually willing. I think the lack of commentary from other readers is that there might not have been enough story for them to decide whether they wanted further chapters.

mind control pill? what a great idea. i really liked this story, but it was definitely too short.

Nice Start but where is Chapter#2 to explain the Consequences and if it Really worked or was Daughter Messing with Daddy's Head.

Give us a sequel!

SEQUEL SEQUEL

Please make a part 2

Real good story.. I hope you wright a part 2

Nice start now that Dad has had his Lil Girl they should move to the Country and Breed her. and maybe a Friend or 2 of hers looking to move.

more pls

What a bunch of bullshit. He drops a pill on her and suddenly he become Master and she wants to blow him? Back to the drawing board . . . .