All Comments on 'A Divorce for Christmas Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
the lucky one

The lucky one is rick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Remember which 'person' you are writing.

"I got tired, Rick, her now ex, used to be a lot of fun, ..."

Would that be "I got tired, Rick, MY now ex, used to be a lot of fun, ..."?

First person, third person? Which?

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