by jennysimms
A really hot read that has me trying to decide where to shoot this load....maybe in the crack of your ass, or across your lips....oops never mind, it's all over my hand...
really hot. When will you post the others you have written
cant wait
what a very hot horny story brilliant loved it. more of this very erotic story. i hope there going to be lots more parts. awesome writing out standing story A DOGGED EXPERIENCE
Wow! Ver erotic and well written. You build the tension and also sense of characters at least between your main character and John.
Just an absolutely lovely tale of a girl getting used just how she wants. Great stuff.
mmmn nice story deffinately got me excited!!
loved the story line!!
A hot story. Slightly puzzled by the Americanisms but well written, well paced and very erotic. Most enjoyable!